Comfort Zone
We have disappointments in our own little world of self-belief
They come as unexpected reality shocks, like an ocean’s hidden reef
And we suddenly find ourselves in rough waters out of our depth
Beyond the imaginary comfort zone of our own homely wealth
The beach is truly a place where people can blend into equality
Nonchantly relaxing on warm sand, and feel at peace with life’s frivolity
Without others taking any notice of your own concealed inabilities
As the sun’s universal energy unites your abstract personalities
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Photo by Ivor Steven
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The second stanza truly resonated, Ivor! What a beautiful metaphor.
Thank you Punam for visiting me here at CHW … and yes I’m pleased you liked my metaphorical analogy 😊🌏
An interesting poem. You are right, the beach is where we all blend in… take it all off/ well almost all… and become one with nature!
Beautifully expressed poem, Ivor. I never thought of the beach as an equalizer, but you did! Astute observation! <3