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Whiskey Neat

By jlwilling
August 13, 2018
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Sharp and bitter-

the drawing in of breath,

the stifling of the vocals

as the burn begins to set.

Soft and sweet-

thirsting lips on hungry skin,

a sparking of the embers

so the fire can begin.

Tingling, spinning-

rushes of forbidden sin.

Small deaths peaking through

the fractures deep within.

Drumming, pounding-

the beating of an unsure heart.

Can he damage what was

broken from the start?

Clenching, releasing-

Sharpened teeth on worried lips,

a seasoned, rebel woman

who still believes in taking risks.

Falling, rising-

She just can’t help herself.

What about him makes her want

to toss those red flags off the shelf?

Raucous laughter-

a lightening of the chest.

But is there more to him than fun?

Is there substance? Is there depth?

Safety, home-

strong arms holding her just right.

Can wholeness be an illusion?

Will it dissipate with light?

Distance, confusion-

a changing of the tides?

Or maybe this was nothing

more than some swirling, churning ride.

Charming, dizzy-

he leaves her wanting more

but he’s only whiskey neat

and she’s had that kind before.

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jlwilling

JL Willing is a fantasy and fiction writer from GA. When she isn't writing, or thinking about writing, or reading (which is really just preparation for writing), you can find her cuddling up with her beloved Austrailian Shephard, Bella, or consistently losing the battle against the chaos and mass destruction her two extremely energetic boys create. JL has a passion for inspiring and encouraging other writers to follow their dreams. She is also a humanitarian at heart and believes in the empowerment of women and equality for all. You will find that her articles cover topics ranging from environmental awareness, feminism, educational reform, and inspirational messages intended to help others live more authentic, joy-filled lives.

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