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I Couldn’t See the Moon

By Ivor Steven
August 12, 2024
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Mid-morning, and I could not see
The daytime moon
White, wispy clouds
Were shrouding my view

I must be going out of my mind.
I stood there thinking, ‘I’m going blind’
And I waited for Mother Nature to be kind

She rewarded my perseverance
With a cursory appearance
Of the Waning Crescent Moon-
The soupy sky’s tainted spoon

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Ivor Steven

Ivor Steven was formerly an Industrial Chemist, then a Plumber, and has been writing poetry for 19 years. He has had numerous poems published in anthologies, and on-line magazines. He is an active member of the Geelong Writers Inc.(Australia), and is a team member/barista with the on-line magazine "Go Dog Go Cafe" (America).

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    Great story Scarlett! Excellent delivery!

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    Thank you so much for visiting my poem here at CHW, Beth

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