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I Couldn’t See the Moon

By Ivor Steven
August 12, 2024
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Mid-morning, and I could not see
The daytime moon
White, wispy clouds
Were shrouding my view

I must be going out of my mind.
I stood there thinking, ‘I’m going blind’
And I waited for Mother Nature to be kind

She rewarded my perseverance
With a cursory appearance
Of the Waning Crescent Moon-
The soupy sky’s tainted spoon

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Ivor Steven

Ivor Steven was formerly an Industrial Chemist, then a Plumber, and has been writing poetry for 19 years. He has had numerous poems published in anthologies, and on-line magazines. He is an active member of the Geelong Writers Inc.(Australia), and is a team member/barista with the on-line magazine "Go Dog Go Cafe" (America).

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Latest Comments

  • Ivor R Steven
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    April 14, 2026
    Thank you very much for your kind words, Derrick

    Arise With My Light

  • Ivor Steven
    on
    April 14, 2026
    Thank you so much for visiting my poem here at CHW, Beth

    Arise With My Light

  • Derrick John Knight
    on
    April 14, 2026
    Another fine combination

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  • Beth Kennedy
    on
    April 13, 2026
    so beautiful, Ivor -

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  • LC Ahl (Lucy)
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    What a beautiful piece. I love your description: "That’s the beauty of love, its layers like ...

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