Coffee House Writers

Main Menu

  • Home
  • Article Categories
    • Fiction
      • Action & Adventure
      • Fantasy
      • Historical Fiction
      • Horror
      • Mystery
      • Romance
      • Science Fiction
      • Speculative Fiction
      • Suspense & Thrillers
      • Westerns
      • Women’s Fiction
      • Women Sleuths
    • Nonfiction
      • Astrology & Tarot
      • Biographies
      • Business
      • Creativity
      • Creative Nonfiction
      • Cooking, Food & Drink
      • Culture
      • Current Affairs & Politics
      • Design, Fashion & Style
      • Entertainment
      • Environment
      • Health & Wellness
      • History
      • Home & Garden
      • Lifestyle
      • Media
      • Memoir & Autobiographies
      • Paranormal
      • Parenting & Family
      • Reviews
      • Science & Technology
      • Self-Help & Relationships
      • Spiritual & Religious
      • Sports
      • Travel
      • True Crime
    • Poetry
      • Acrostic
  • About Us
    • Our Story
    • Our Founder
  • Meet Our Admin
    • Chief Editors
    • Editors
  • Testimonials
  • Apply
  • Login

logo

Coffee House Writers

  • Home
  • Article Categories
    • Fiction
      • Action & Adventure
      • Fantasy
      • Historical Fiction
      • Horror
      • Mystery
      • Romance
      • Science Fiction
      • Speculative Fiction
      • Suspense & Thrillers
      • Westerns
      • Women’s Fiction
      • Women Sleuths
    • Nonfiction
      • Astrology & Tarot
      • Biographies
      • Business
      • Creativity
      • Creative Nonfiction
      • Cooking, Food & Drink
      • Culture
      • Current Affairs & Politics
      • Design, Fashion & Style
      • Entertainment
      • Environment
      • Health & Wellness
      • History
      • Home & Garden
      • Lifestyle
      • Media
      • Memoir & Autobiographies
      • Paranormal
      • Parenting & Family
      • Reviews
      • Science & Technology
      • Self-Help & Relationships
      • Spiritual & Religious
      • Sports
      • Travel
      • True Crime
    • Poetry
      • Acrostic
  • About Us
    • Our Story
    • Our Founder
  • Meet Our Admin
    • Chief Editors
    • Editors
  • Testimonials
  • Apply
  • Login
  • Battle Caw

  • Watch Your Step

  • The Darkness of Your Absence

  • Neptune’s Fortune Part 4

  • Thicker Than Water

  • Of Lockets and Pomegranates: Chapter 20

  • Who I Am

  • The Codfish Carbuncle Case: Chapter 6

  • Little Life

  • To Be Known

  • School Nights

  • An Interview With Time

  • Smile At Screams

  • Neptune’s Fortune Part 3

  • Waiting for Dawn

  • Of Lockets and Pomegranates: Chapter 19

  • Days of Innocence

  • Dragon Slayer: Chapter One

  • After Her, Then Her Again

  • Email Overload

Action & AdventureFantasyFiction
Home›Fiction›Action & Adventure›Neptune’s Fortune Part 4

Neptune’s Fortune Part 4

By Amanda L. Shirk
May 18, 2026
1
0
Share:
A dark orange and yellow tinted picture fading into black ocean scene with two ships sailing. The one in the foreground is a pirate ship and the smaller one is chasing after the pirate ship. In the background there is a lighthouse.
Iván Tamás / Pixabay
This entry is part 4 of 4 in the series Neptune's Fortune

Neptune's Fortune
  • Neptune’s Fortune: Part 1
  • Neptune’s Fortune: Part 2
  • Neptune’s Fortune Part 3
  • Neptune’s Fortune Part 4
0
(0)

Inky clouds turned the afternoon into an early midnight as an ebony vessel coasted into Port Victoria. Doomsday itself fell over the pirate town, and for once, everything stood silent. 

From the deck, an armored figure watched the citizens with a crimson-flecked stare that promised bloodshed. 

“Sir, we await your orders.” His spindly personal attendant hovered somewhere behind him. 

“Prepare to dock and send the Guard off first. Find her,” he demanded. The crew scrambled to obey his commands. 

Lucian’s smile instilled fear in even his most seasoned men as they carried out their duties to avoid facing punishment. They needed no reminder of his maniacal laughter when he watched a pack of sharks fight over his thrashing former first mate. Nor the recruit he hung from the mast to let birds peck out the eyes that had questioned his order. He took the governor of Satisterra’s young daughter and fed from her in front of them. Her bloodcurdling screams echoed even after he was done. He doled out his wrath liberally to ensure everyone had their taste. 

Vesta will never escape again. He balled his fists. A silent tremor ran through his arm as the creak of ropes and the rough scrape of wood announced the gangplank’s descent. An unnatural breeze billowed his scarlet cape as he stalked behind The Guard’s measured march. 

She was always too clever. I admit, though, I admire that spirit. She’s thwarted me at every turn and still refuses to break. I must have her as mine and mine alone. My precious dark jewel. Never again shall she leave my presence. 

Screams filled the air, bringing Lucian out of his thoughts. 

Officers ransacked houses and dragged people out of shops. They left the entire village in ruins as they searched, leaving no place untouched. Crackling flames sent waves of heat into the air, and the taste of ash stung as the tavern and its stable blazed. Fleeing residents panicked to realize hellfire confined them within the square. 

A brave few brandished swords to protect their homes, but the soldiers quickly impaled them. Suffocating smoke overwhelmed the village as Lucian’s men eliminated any resistance opposing them.  

He examined the remaining citizens with a sharp gaze. The children will make fine servants. Trainable. These men will prove useful. Either workers or provisions. It’s been months since I last hunted. 

“Transfer the males and youngsters to the ship. Line up the women.” He smirked as the soldiers rushed to do his bidding. A rush of what others call happiness filled his black heart. 

A third of the troops advanced into nearby streets, seeking Marina or her friends. Another segment was loading the new servants onto the ship. The leftover guards concealed their master and his prey. He moved like a phantom in the darkness, advancing on the line of women in a bat-like swoop. 

A soldier interrupted him half an hour later. “My Lord, there’s no trace of the girl!” 

With blood dripping from his pointed teeth, he rumbled like thunder, and his eyes flashed pure fire. The woman he fed upon dropped lifelessly, bleeding into the dirt. 

“What?” H taunted the one who whimpered before him to restate his confession. 

“We can’t find her,” the officer stammered.  

Ire roared in Lucian’s ears as he glowered at his follower. With a flash of sword, the soldier’s head rolled towards the group gathered. A warning to the others about failure. 

“My Lord, this man might know.”  

Lucian turned towards the voice of one of his newest recruits as he dragged an elderly man in hideously bright clothing forward by his silvery white hair.  

Hope filled the venerable man’s expression as he clutched his potential survival. Lucian’s grin turned to sick glee. He’d seen this desperate plea before. A parlay of knowledge in exchange for a futile existence. The begging on knees, groveling, faint light in the victims’ eyes as they wait for the answer to their fate. It made Him giddy. 

Let’s see what this fool has. Maybe he’ll be useful. 

“Proceed.” He gestured to the ground at his feet as the soldiers compelled the elder to kneel. 

“A woman with red hair and a man were looking for Neptune’s Palace,” the aged fool alleged, carelessly brave enough to look straight into Lucian’s gaze. 

“Ha! Neptune’s Palace is a myth,” Lucian sniggered. 

“The island is real, m’Lord. Just the treasure itself is a fiction.” Drool dripped from his mouth as he tattled. “I gave them a map, but I don’t think they know what awaits them,” the shopkeep said, forgetting the dangerous position in which he found himself. 

I’m what awaits them. But he had bigger problems than a mere mortal correcting him. 

“How long ago?” He stared deep into the poor soul’s eyes as if he could reach the far corners of his mind. 

“About th—” the shopkeep started. 

Lucian turned on his heel as though he’d seen the answer for himself. His fingers snapped a signal. Screams rang across the village as the recruit dragged the hostage out of sight and beat him until his bones cracked. 

Three hours ago. The little bitch eluded me. Never again! Rage filled him with heat and dark fascination with the girl who publicly defied him and lived. 

A nascent plan began to form in his mind. He returned to his cabin and paced the floor as he continued to strategize his next move. Sounds echoed through the decks as the women he didn’t consume were shackled next to the men and children in the holds. The wails and begging resembled the victim’s pulsing heartbeat while he fed. They eased the brooding anger. 

Almost. 

She will be mine! I will break her, whatever it takes. And only after she’s submitted to my darkest hungers will I raise her to be my dark lady. 

The day turned to night, and the candles in the cabin flared to life, touched by no one. Shadows created sharp edges, and the room was cast in a deep ruby light. Something only a demon might enjoy. 

A hesitant knock sounded on the door. 

“My Master?” A young girl’s voice came through. Although melodic, its undertones felt programmed. 

“You may enter, Laetitia,” he growled, annoyed at the interruption to his personal space. A petite girl of sixteen with rosy skin and braided hair the color of sunlight walked in. She knelt and bowed her head. Her white gauzy dress pooled around her knees. The position exposed the back of her neck. 

“Sire, if it pleases you, the men have done your bidding and are awaiting your instructions.” The girl’s eyes never left the floor. 

Lucian nodded. “You have done well, Laetitia. I will reward you shortly. Wait for me to return, in position one on the bed.” He stormed out of the cabin without a backward glance. 

Once he reached the open deck, the soldiers snapped to attention. Parts of the port city were still smoldering. The moonlight made his pale skin glow. His eyes flashed amber and crimson. The gold of his signet rings glinted. Even his armor shone with purpose. 

“Set sail for Neptune’s Palace. But first, burn all this as a message. Those who defy Lord Lucian Diaboli will pay.” 

With a swish of his cloak, Lucian disappeared below deck, trusting his men to obey and set sail. 


Editor: Shannon Hensley

Click on a star to rate it!

Average rating 0 / 5. Vote count: 0

No votes so far! Be the first to rate this post.

As you enjoyed this post...

Follow us on social media!

Oh no!

Let us improve this post!

Tell us how we can improve this post?

Neptune's Fortune

Neptune’s Fortune Part 3
TagsAdult FictionFantasy Romancemedieval worldpiratesserial fiction
Previous Article

Thicker Than Water

Next Article

The Darkness of Your Absence

0
Shares
  • 0
  • +
  • 0
  • 0

Amanda L. Shirk

Related articles More from author

  • Flamingo in the water
    RomanceMysteryFiction

    The Island Flamingo: Chapter 20

    October 30, 2023
    By Adriana Philips
  • Dark red and orange sunset sky with dramatic, swirling clouds. In the center, a decorative red-orange label with the title 'The Prince’s Secret' in white serif font.
    FictionRomanceFantasy

    Truth in the Cottage

    August 4, 2025
    By Lynifer Craft
  • From Cursive To Curses
    FictionFantasyMystery

    From Cursive To Curses- Part I

    August 10, 2020
    By Lindsey Gruden
  • The text "In Deep Water by Jessi Hoff" is set against a deep-water background.
    FictionRomanceScience Fiction

    In Deep Water: Chapter 11

    December 9, 2024
    By Jessi Hoff
  • Plantation home with long driveway with mature oak trees along each side of the driveway
    FictionMysterySuspense & Thrillers

    Southern Ways – Part 15

    January 27, 2025
    By LC Ahl (Lucy)
  • A fishmonger's shop with the title Howard and Son
    FictionMysterySuspense & Thrillers

    The Codfish Carbuncle Case: Chapter 3

    March 16, 2026
    By Adriana Philips

Leave a reply Cancel reply

You may be interested

  • EntertainmentDesign, Fashion & StyleCreativitySelf-Help & RelationshipsPoetryMemoir & Autobiographies

    Summer Sweetheart

  • Monarch Butterfly Draws Nectar
    TravelEnvironmentCreativityParenting & FamilyFictionPoetryFantasy

    Eulogistic Ballad—By a Butterfly

  • 2024 calendar with wine glass and gold decor
    Poetry

    2024 Speaks

Timeline

  • May 18, 2026

    Battle Caw

  • May 18, 2026

    Watch Your Step

  • May 18, 2026

    The Darkness of Your Absence

  • May 18, 2026

    Neptune’s Fortune Part 4

  • May 18, 2026

    Thicker Than Water

Latest Comments

  • LC Ahl (Lucy)
    on
    May 4, 2026
    Great story Scarlett! Excellent delivery!

    One Last Time

  • LC Ahl (Lucy)
    on
    May 4, 2026
    I loved this series. You have a gift for world building!

    Lover of the Queen: Epilogue

  • Ivor R Steven
    on
    April 14, 2026
    Thank you very much for your kind words, Derrick

    Arise With My Light

  • Ivor Steven
    on
    April 14, 2026
    Thank you so much for visiting my poem here at CHW, Beth

    Arise With My Light

  • Derrick John Knight
    on
    April 14, 2026
    Another fine combination

    Arise With My Light

About us

  • coffeehousewriters3@gmail.com

Donate to Coffee House Writers

Coindrop.to me

Follow us

© Copyright 2018-2026 Coffee House Writers. All Rights Reserved. Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s administrator and owner is strictly prohibited. Privacy Policy · Disclaimer