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A Dank and Foggy Morn

By Ivor Steven
June 24, 2024
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Tis early, on a dank and foggy morn
All the groans of lovers sound inside out
And their bed lights shine on the icy lawn
Even the yapping canines have lost count

I’m wandering these streets, groping on trust
Like the bad old days of whiskey and wine
I’m looking for her last piece of stardust
All I find is some leftover moonshine

Tiredness strikes and I’m dreaming unsound
My mystical girl is out there, but where?
I stumble forward and I hit the ground
Another lost night falls on my armchair

I’m gazing at the stars through timeworn eyes
I’m waiting for her soul to wave goodbye

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Ivor Steven

Ivor Steven was formerly an Industrial Chemist, then a Plumber, and has been writing poetry for 19 years. He has had numerous poems published in anthologies, and on-line magazines. He is an active member of the Geelong Writers Inc.(Australia), and is a team member/barista with the on-line magazine "Go Dog Go Cafe" (America).

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2 comments

  1. Eugi 25 June, 2024 at 14:05 Reply

    Beautifully written and stunning use of metaphors, Ivor.

    • Ivor R Steven 26 June, 2024 at 13:05 Reply

      Thank you for your lovely words and for visiting the Coffee House Writers Magazine, Eugenia 😊🌏

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