Braver than Most

โWhere is Jack Kelly? I know heโs here.โ
If the man with the gun hadnโt yelled, Elizabeth wouldnโt have heard him; her ears were still ringing. His gravelly voice managed to break her trance on the weapon he held. ย He was wearing a black hoodie with a ski mask, burgundy gloves, black track pants, and beat-up, formerly white sneakers. His partner was shorter but wore similar garb to his companion, except for brown gloves and shoes. He held a larger gun, longer and with a wooden grip. A shotgun, she assumed.
โJACK KELLY,โ the tall man yelled again. This time, he pointed the gun around the room at the diners. The shorter one did the same. Patrons screamed as the guns swept the room.
Elizabeth looked around the diner, turning her head as little as she could so as not to draw the ire of the shooters. Everyone she could see was cowering, everyone except the old man at the counter. He was standing now. He wasnโt particularly tall; she had three or four inches on him. She noticed his thumb would rub the black ring every once in a while.
Behind the old man was skater-boy, curled up on the ground like the rest of the customers, his face pale. The tall man pointed his gun at Jenny behind the counter. Elizabeth desperately hoped the old man was an off-duty cop, or a veteran, or something.
โWHERE IS JACK KELLY?โ he screamed.
Jenny sobbed with her hands stretched high above her head. The tears made Elizabeth realize she was crying too and hadnโt noticed. โI donโt know. He didnโt work today,โ Jenny choked out.
The man didnโt buy it. โI saw him in here minutes ago. Where did he go? JACK! COME OUT JACK! โHe moved around the counter.
โThere you are, you little shit.โ Heโd found skater-boy, still cowered on the ground. โYou think I wouldnโt notice you selling me cut product? Do you think Iโm fucking stupid?โ the tall man asked. Jack didnโt make a sound to defend himself. He sat there, hands held above his head as he sobbed. Then, another voice spoke. Not skater-boyโs and not either of the shooters.
โSold you bad snow, did he? Shame on you, kid.โ The old manโs smooth, low voice didnโt waver. While he spoke, he made his way between the tall man and Jack. He was directly next to Elizabethโs booth. With a closer look at him, she realized that she had misjudged his age. He wasnโt in his mid-fifties; he was late sixties, early seventies. His face was more than lined; it was worn and wrinkled. And his eyes, brown in color, looked older than he was.
โGet the fuck out of my way, grandpa, or youโre catching a bullet too,โ the man snarled.
โNow, now. What if, instead of killing this poor idiot who probably didnโt know the coke was mixed, I pay you the damages? Iโll refund whatever it is you paid him for, plus a fee for the dishonesty, of course, and we can all go on our merry ways?โ the old man said. The gunman didnโt seem to notice, but he moved closer to him with every sentence. He gestured with his right hand as he spoke, all the while his left hand gently brushed against his jacket. The ring glowed faintly as he spoke.
โThis little prick cost me more than money. I have a reputation.โ Though he rejected the offer, his right arm slacked slightly, and he stopped moving as much. He was no longer screaming, at least. The old manโs attempt to de-escalate was working.
โHow much is that loss of reputation worth? I assure you I can cover it,โ the old man said with confidence. Elizabeth saw the tall man tense up. His arm went rigid again, and he fixed the grip he had on his gun. He shuffled his stance, making sure his left foot was behind him.
โYou think you can buy me? Fuck you.โ He raised the gun slightly higher, so it pointed at the center of the old manโs chest.
He had moved next to Elizabethโs booth. His friend was a few paces behind, but faced away. The old man continued to thumb at his ring. The gunman was going to shoot. Someone had to do something.
She darted her eyes around the diner at the other patrons, all of them terrified, many of them in tears. She glanced back at Jules. Jules looked at her, and her eyes went wider than they already were. She mouthed, โDonโt.โ
Elizabeth did.
Everything moved slowly for the next few seconds. She pushed off with both feet and launched herself out of the booth, positioned to tackle the gun out of his hands. How to deal with his partner didnโt cross her mind. She focused only on disarming him before he could kill the old man.
She hit his hand just before he pulled the trigger. The gun went off as she pushed it up and to the right. The bullet careened into the ceiling somewhere. A spray of plaster rained down from the impact. The noise of the blast startled her. She closed her eyes and jumped. When she opened them again, she realized sheโd made a huge mistake. To her dismay, the tall man hadnโt dropped his weapon. Instead, his arm swung towards her.
The butt of the gun smashed against her right cheek. Her vision went blurry. Her ears were already ringing. She didnโt realize that she was falling backwards until the checkered tile greeted her with an abrupt embrace. She looked up to see the gun pointed at her. He was screaming something, but she couldnโt hear it. She stared down the barrel and knew that sheโd failed. At least sheโd tried. Elizabeth didnโt close her eyes as the manโs arm tensed; she wouldnโt give him the satisfaction of seeing her scared. She hoped that he wouldnโt hurt her friends.
She didnโt hear the gun go off. Out of the corner of her eye, there was a bright flash. As she looked up at the tall man, she watched his wrist explode. The bullet passed cleanly through it, spraying fragments of bone, muscle, and blood out the other side. The man with the larger weapon spun to face the noise, but not fast enough. Another flash. His kneecap imploded, viscera spouting out behind him as he collapsed on one knee.
The first manโs wrist went limp, and his pistol fell from his fingers. The shorter man dropped his shotgun and screamed while holding his eviscerated, bloody knee.
She couldnโt look away. Unable to hear anything and head spinning, she sat in silence for a moment. It wasnโt until the old man bent down close to her head that she felt herself breathe. She hadnโt realized sheโd been holding her breath.
His mouth moved, but no words came out. He repeated something to her, but she couldnโt understand it. He stood above her but didnโt take his eyes off the two bleeding men. In his left hand, he held a pistol, the barrel smoking from the two shots he had fired. With his right, he made a pushing motion. That, she understood.
She shook her head but didnโt move to stand. Instead, she sat up and dragged herself backwards over to the booth, where she felt all three of her friends grab onto some part of her.
The most blood Elizabeth had ever seen was when her friend had jumped off the swings in elementary school and landed on her arm, which broke and popped through the skin. She thought she was okay with gore because that hadnโt made her feel anything other than sympathy. But the amount of blood splattered across the tiles now made her nauseous. She felt something on her face. She knew it had to be blood, but she was unsure if it was hers or the shooters’. That didnโt help her stomach.
The old man gestured as he stood with his gun in his hand, a smaller one than the tall man had held. It was silver instead of black. Her friends were talking to her, but she couldnโt make out what they were saying. She could feel only the nausea and the cold, wet tiles beneath her hands.
As hard as she tried, she couldnโt pull her attention from the old man. The black ring still glowed.
Editor: Shannon Hensley









