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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 25

By Adriana Philips
February 5, 2024
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This entry is part 25 of 45 in the series The Island Flamingo

The Island Flamingo

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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 1

June 7, 2021
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 2

June 21, 2021
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 3

July 19, 2021
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 4

August 2, 2021
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 5

September 13, 2021
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 6

November 8, 2021
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 7

February 7, 2022
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 8

April 18, 2022
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 9

June 13, 2022
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 10

September 19, 2022
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 11

March 6, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 12

April 3, 2023
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 13

May 1, 2023
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 14

June 12, 2023
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 15

August 7, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 16

September 5, 2023
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 17

September 18, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 18

October 2, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 19

October 16, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 20

October 30, 2023
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 21

November 20, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 22

December 4, 2023
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 23

December 18, 2023
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 24

January 29, 2024
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 25

February 5, 2024
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 26

February 19, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 27

March 4, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 28

March 18, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 29

April 1, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 30

April 29, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 31

May 27, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 32

June 10, 2024
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 33

June 24, 2024
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 34

July 8, 2024
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The Island Flamingo: Chapter 35

July 29, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 36

August 19, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 37

September 2, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 38

September 16, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 39

September 30, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 40

October 14, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 41

November 25, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 42

December 9, 2024
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 43

January 20, 2025
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 44

May 26, 2025
Flamingo in the water

The Island Flamingo: Chapter 45

July 7, 2025
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I continued to date Louis every weekend for over three months; we had dates in restaurants, parks, beaches, movie theaters, etc. Louis grew closer to me; he even bought a beautiful pink necklace for our twentieth date.

I enjoyed our time together, but the reminder of Miss Billingsโ€™ assignment had kept me on edge. I made excuses in my mind for why Louis was not a good match for me. He was sloppy, awkward in high places, told corny jokes, and had two chipped teeth from his time in pew-wee hockey. Despite everything, all those little things made me love him even more.

My heart aches with regret for not making better choices and saying no to Mackenzie Billings However, itโ€™s too late for any of that. Time wore on, and one day after a picnic in the park, he invited me to the house he shared with his mother, as sheโ€™d been eager to meet me.

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Like Miss Billings said, the house appeared like a pink dot in the middle of a Glendale neighborhood. Pink flamingo ornaments littered the lawn and looked out into the street like curious cats. They stared into my soul and judged me for my dubious actions.

Louis comforted me and said, “My mom loves flamingos, but sheโ€™s not insane. The lawn ornaments are a joke for her.”

I smiled and went inside with Louis. To my surprise, his mother wore a yellow shirt with blue jeans and clogs, not in the color of pink. She grabbed my hand and shook it with enthusiasm.

She complimented my hair and said, “So nice to meet you at last, Jessica. My nameโ€™s Martha. Lou-Louโ€™s talked about you so much since your first date! You put a fire in his heart!”

Louis blushed and whispered, “Mom, please donโ€™t make a big fuss about this, and say my nickname in public.”

I giggled, kissed him on the cheek and said, “Donโ€™t be embarrassed. I like the name Lou-Lou.”

Louis smiled while Miss Martha guided us into the house. On the outside, I grinned, but on the inside, I braced myself for my assignment.

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Adriana Philips

An aspiring woman writer with an interest in speculative fiction and mysteries. I have several mini-libraries in my home.

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